Very close to winning VFH but sucked major dick at the final votes, so I'm going to fix it up. Please give me help to fix up this article without changing the concept. Indepth please, thanks.
WILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 22:31, December 21, 2009 (UTC)
Also, people have edited alot of things in this article, to note the tough guy and the old guy are my pictures.--WILLYOU 333Talk IF YOU DARE 09:46, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
Wait... it almost won in VFH? LOL. ☃☃☃☃☃☃☃☃☃☃☃09:53 December 23
Jokes are easy to understand. Typical Neo's kid that tries to write something. Misspellings are just sou kewl and made in the adequate numbers. You included Chuck Norris what is just necessary in that cases. Well,, you might bowl out lalalalalalalalala section and put some random Rolling the head on the keyboard or how it's named. It's funny if you know what's going on. Retarded, infantile but funny. You may also consider adding some fake links to kewl pages ;p
Not too original, but let it be.
Prose and formatting:
Prose and formation is just PERFECT! But you may consider adding some broken formating also commonly done by the noobs
I laughed hardly at the fat man. But you may consider some more random articles, maybe something with broken link?