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World War XXI

Well, hey, I made my first article on Uncyclopedia. I know I have a terrible sense of humor and that this article could use some improvements so I'm asking for a Pee Review. EDIT:Put homor instead of humor >.< --156.34.12.107 22:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC) 156.34.12.107 22:08, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

Well, somebody could review it for you in a week if your link isn't broken by then.

This is Queen Elizabeth I's DJ Jasper's signature. ProfileTalkASA 23:14, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

Humour:	10	Excellent
Concept:	10	Great alternative history, future history!
Prose and formatting:	9	Corrected errors, watch those typos, but all A-OK man!
Images:	10	Damn good artwork. I'm a artist in real life.
Miscellaneous:	10	Really good work. Keep it up.
Final Score:	49	THAT IS A GREAT MASTERPIECE !!!!
Reviewer:	Alien Hunter 00:11, 11 June 2008 (UTC)