Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/World War III

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edit World War III

Gangnam style is your mom (talk) 21:30, April 28, 2013 (UTC)

Humour: 6 You have several very nice jokes, it is not bad.
  • I especially liked 'Walkthrough' section.
  • Parts about 'Russia' and 'China' seem to be racist and are rather pointless. For example, why do you beat the crap out of Russians: isn't it the opposite? (Just kidding, because I am Russian) In addition to this, everyone expects Russia and China to be in a World War 3 against everyone else, so it not a funny joke anymore but rather a cliché: if you absolutely want to save it, develop more, so it will be funny!
  • ALL the long lists that you have are neither interesting to read nor funny (what is the point of listing all the famous world leaders, superheroes, terrorists?)
  • Random parts about, for example, Inception guy (Why on Earth?)
Concept: 6 If you are new to Uncyclopedia, that is what you should do: create your article in the main space - World War 3 or your user space -User:Gangnam style is your mom/World War 3, then create a request in the Pee Review section where it says 'new entry'. And don't put the article content on the Pee Review page: someone who will review it, will find it by clicking the link. That is the way the Review page works.
  • Concerning content itself, the concept is funny: to make a computer game out of a World War, but it is not very developed because it:
  1. doesn't have a lot of jokes
  2. the idea behind the article doesn't seem developed at all (you just make a snowball video game without anything specific about it)
Prose and formatting: 4 The point of Uncyclopedia itself is to be a parody on Wikipedia, normal encyclopedias, etc. So you are supposed to have an article which seems to be encyclopedic with the proper formatting and everything. Words written with CAPITAL LETTERS LOOK LIKE YOU ARE YELLING AT SOMEONE and spoil the impression of the article. The same thing about:
  • Swearing (beat the crap out of...)
  • Parts about "This article is very boring", "I am bored" (they are completely pointless; for example after reading these, I lose the desire of reading your article)
  • Long lists (I have told you about them in the Humor part)
  • End: "beat the crap out of JB, have sex with Kronos"
  1. The article is also too short
  2. However, at the very beginning the article looks very formal (which is almost always funny in Uncyclopedia: an article seems to be encyclopedic but is actually complete nonsense) as well as at the very end.
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Miscellaneous: 4 (Average score)
Final Score: 20 Good contribution, keep working and don't lose inspiration! Get familiar with the way the site works, in order not to commit errors! The main problems are shortness, randomness and the absence of encylopediness. I have tried to find all the negative points in order to help you improve it and not to make you angry or sad. P.S. You can ask for another review after improving the article.
Reviewer: Anton (talk) Uncyclopedia United 14:45, May 6, 2013 (UTC)


DO NOT READ THIS ARTICLE. THIS ARTICLE IS HIGHLY BORING.

World War 3 is a new virtual-reality game, where you REALLY go into the real World War 3 in the future and fight and beat the crap out of Russia, China, etc.World War III has nothing much to be talked about. It is just that Stalin, Hitler, Obama, Mitty R Money, and Osama barrel Laden had a snowball fight with Barney, Elmo, Big Bird on Sesame Street and suddenly that weird guy in Inception went into their dreams and killed them all, then Iron Man, Batman, Spider Man, etc, had came and finished that inception guy. Then Hippie Zeus and his bunch came to finish the heroes off, then Poopy " I LUV to jack off " Jackson came to finish the Geek gods off, then the Giants and Gaea woke and killed the demigods, then comes the Titans to finish the giants off, then Urinus (a.k.a. The god of pee) came and used pee-in-your-mouth attack and told them to shut up. Then Chaos sealed all of them back into eternal darkness, where they started another snowball fight known as WW4, where you can put rock, poop, penis, boobs, hydrogen bombs, atomic bombs, melons, bombs, etc., into your own snowball, you have one snowball per lifetime, then you die and reincarnate into a different person and get another freaking snowball, and when you hit 100 person with one freaking snowball in three times in a row, in the fourth rebirth you can choose another rebirth or go to the isle of blest.

edit The Game Rule

You just throw snowballs in different styles with different weapons contained inside them. You will reach the Isles of Blest when you beat 100 person with one snowball three lifetimes in a row, but of course this is WW4, or post-war. For WW3, you just do the same as WW4, but one difference: you only have one lifetime or you fail the entire game. Of course, you can choose different characters, alive or dead like Justin Dickster, Osama Wild, Barracks Obama, Mitt "Romney R Money", etc.

edit The After Game

The post-game actually had one thing that was pretty wild: you got to live a social life like in real life. You can have sex with Kronos, beat the crap out of JB, etc., etc. If you beat the main story, you can actually live in the game and be stuck in there. So we kindly suggest that you never try to beat the main story.

edit Walkthrough

Well,you can either walk through this game and do nothing like the title suggests, or go suicide, or bravely fight. Your choice. Please do NOT READ ANY FURTHER. I AM NOT WRITING ANY FURTHER BECAUSE I AM BORED.

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