This article is a work in progress, I'll add more wines, more images and a better intro later. But does the concept work as is?--Nydas 19:41, 13 November 2007 (UTC)
Good concept so far; has great potential. I'll refrain from giving a full Pee Review seeing as how the article isn't complete yet, but when it is, let me know and I'll be more than happy to review it for ya. Cheers! --Hotadmin4u69[TALK] 19:51, 13 November 2007 (UTC)
It may be unfinished, but there's no denying the quality on show so far.
Oh yes, I like it. Plenty of potential, several directions you could take, all promising. I get the feeling I'll really enjoy it when it's finished.
Prose and formatting:
Well written so far, you're capturing the feel of a great many wine writers here. Not certain about the line "You can nary be serious, my friend" - not certain the word 'nary' fits there. Just needs expansion, but you've got that covered, right?
Needs more pics, but again, you've got that covered, according to your note above.
Average of above scores. Rounded up a bit, because I like it!
A really promising article. I'll refrain from my usual flood of extra comments as you say you plan to add more later. But if you want suggestions, give me a shout on my talk page.
One thought - a paragraph or two on the basics of wine tasting up front would be good.
Give me a shout if EMC's busy when you finish it and want another review, I'll be interested to see how this turns out!