Liked the whole fan-centric review parody. Mass deaths may not be as funny as you think and contribute little to the tone of this article. It's best to avoid global RealPolitik in such a parody. Remember "Will and Grace" live in a world of their own - fewer connections to "reality" the better.
This is a good wrong-end-of-the-telescope-of-time irreverent look at a popular show
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Muppets as Will and Grace is inspired
A good effort to match the savage, black humor of the show - it's already absurd, don't need to push it.