Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Why?:You Should Kill Yourself

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edit Why?:You Should Kill Yourself

Hey, I'm Billy's Grandma, and I'm just wondering if someone could look over this for me, Unless your faint at heart or literally considering suicide, It should be a Snap!

BILLYSGRANDMA 02:58, 24 May 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Suicide is kind of a taboo subject to make fun of. It is good that you don't take yourself too seriously in this article.
Concept: 7 The concept isn't really original. You may have even perhaps seen someone who has done a similar thing somewhere in a blog site. This make the whole thing kind of predictable form the start to the end.
Prose and formatting: 7 Too much screaming. I can't think of any other way to execute the concept, but the all-caps approach, in my opinion, is kind of cheap and too frequently abused.
Images: 7 Tina Fay is good. The emo guy at the top, on the other hand, is just gross. So is the guy who wears out his arms bashing the keyboard.
Miscellaneous: 10 Not much of other things I can see wrong in this article
Final Score: 39 The entirety of the article is too predictable. The concept is kind of old and some of the pictures are just plain unpleasant to look at. The shock factor is better used only discreetly and sparingly.
Reviewer: JoeMonco 17:47, 24 May 2008 (UTC)
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