I'll have a go at this one, although by rights it should be STM. Still...
Good stuff. Like the stuff about moose spirituality and the menu method in particular
Inspired - where did you get that idea? ;-)
Prose and formatting:
Fine enough, although for me the lack of consistency with the pluralisation grates a tad (but I am the type that happens to). If you've started with Mooses, I think it would feel better to stick with Mooses as your plural throughout.
There are some, they fit, they work, they're fine. If I'm being picky, the steam powered moose doesn't quite look right (I know a steam powered moose isn't right, but the pic doesn't look, oh, you know...), but it's still fine.
A møøse once bit my sister
Yeah, like it. Mind you, you should still be shot. With a gonne. But in a fleshy part where it will heal quickly. I've been watching too many violent films lately.
I'll break the laws of grammar and go for Mooses throughout! Oh, and I'll have to see about that steam-powered moose. I get what you mean. It's supposed to be stupid-looking, which it is, but you're right, something's... off. Shame this thing can't be on VFH, everyone'll see it as a STM ego type thing. Bonus points for referencing Monty Python and Terry Pratchett in the same pee review. –SirSkullthumper,MD(criticize•writings•formspring) 19:08 Sep 14, 2007