I've been working on this one a bit, and I was wondering how it looks? Good, bad, funny, lame? Your opinions and suggestions for improvement are greatly appreciated.
P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 17:15, Sep 22
||some great laughs here, especially given its length.
||this is an article that should be absolutely horrible. but its not....so good job...?
|Prose and formatting:
||looks pretty good, but you need way more links. i like links, a lot.
||love the last one, not crazy about the first one. maybe a picture of whales plotting against us in thier underwater lairs? or whales demonstrating their technology by strapping weapons to themselves?
||lots of little laughs. love the Jesus part.
||very nicely done. stands by itself, it doesn't seem to need padding just for length's sake. i think i'll head on over to VFH and give it a vote.
||-- 03:14, 23 September 2007 (UTC)