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edit Why?:Nuke the whales

I've been working on this one a bit, and I was wondering how it looks? Good, bad, funny, lame? Your opinions and suggestions for improvement are greatly appreciated.

P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 17:15, Sep 22

Humour: 9 some great laughs here, especially given its length.
Concept: 7.5 this is an article that should be absolutely horrible. but its not....so good job...?
Prose and formatting: 8.5 looks pretty good, but you need way more links. i like links, a lot.
Images: 7.5 love the last one, not crazy about the first one. maybe a picture of whales plotting against us in thier underwater lairs? or whales demonstrating their technology by strapping weapons to themselves?
Miscellaneous: 9.5 lots of little laughs. love the Jesus part.
Final Score: 42 very nicely done. stands by itself, it doesn't seem to need padding just for length's sake. i think i'll head on over to VFH and give it a vote.
Reviewer: --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 03:14, 23 September 2007 (UTC)
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