Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Why?:Hunt Unicorns

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edit Why?:Hunt Unicorns

A little page I made in about 2 hours. It's not much, but I think it has promise. --  Le Cejak <-> 10:39, 24 September 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 Great on the begining, but a bit more needed on the lists.
Concept: 10 Ha HA Amazing Where did you get that idea?
Prose and formatting: 6 Weakest point in the article, needs a few checks on spelling and grammar.
Images: 9 Brilliant. Pink unicorn needs a caption though
Miscellaneous: 10 (Extra Points for the tumbleweed at the end)
Final Score: 43 Amazing. Clean up the grammer and It could be featured. Really.
Reviewer: --I like cheese 20:53, 28 October 2007 (UTC)
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