Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Wade Boggs

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Humour: 5.5 you've got some good lines here. 'pope of baseball' gave me a good chuckle. but you tend more towards random humor and things that have been run into the ground around here, like time travel. see final comments.
Concept: 10 YES! that's what i said when i saw this in the pee review queue. this is an article that i would have written myself eventually. i guess i'll have to take mike greenwell.
Prose and formatting: 6 really short, you should build it up. grammar nd stuff looks good. you need more links, like this one. the list at the end needs to be worked into the body, because a list thrown at the end of an article tends to drag it down.
Images: 3 image of wade boggs on a horse. good. needs a few more, maybe one of boggs in rome or something. also, boggs eating chicken!
Miscellaneous: 10 'is one of the original ghostbusters'. awesome.
Final Score: 34.5 from snooping around your userpages, i see you're quite new here. this is a solid first effort. (mine was on my namesake, and i still havent gotten around to fixing it up, but it's very similar to this article.) my advice is as follows: take a look at our holy book, HTBFANJS. read it. read it again. and again and again and again. it always seems to give you ideas on how to improve articles. then take a look at some of our featured articles by pushing the 'featured content' button to the left of your screen. get an idea of what's seen as the best of the best. go back to your article, beef it up, take out some of the random, throw in some serious deadpan stuff, find some images (or request them), and throw it back on pee review. may i say, again welcome, a solid first effort, and keep up the good work. don't hesitate to ask for help, just pick up the Gerryphone and dial '30'.
Reviewer: --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 06:46, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
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