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edit Why?:I'm In court, Mum

Hi, I'm looking for quite an in-depth review here, by an experienced reviewer. I KNOW, I KNOW! It hasn't got any pictures. It's quite late, here, and I just wanted to get opinions on the writing. I've been searching for pictures for an hour or so and I can't really find anything that's suitable. So suggestions for pictures would be good and yes, fine...give me a zero for images! Fine! :P - [21:04 4 August] Sir FSt Don MafiaHatBlack.gif Yettie

My computer doesn't like that link. Scary rules and shit pops up when I click. I can't do it anyway. SK Sir Orian57Talk Gay flag RotM 21:19 4 August 2008
My. Eyes. They. Have. Been. Soiled. D: --Sir DJ ~ Irreverent Icons-flag-au Noobaward Wotm Unbooks mousepad GUN 14:08, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

I have some pictures that you might want to use. All of the following images were provided by me. I thought that the article was very cultured, which made it even funnier, and that after the punch to the gut, the darling son was justified in punishing the blonde child. Use any one you want, unless you want none of them in which case i take no offense. --User:Altair/sig 00:14, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Used-condom Blonde child Dead parrot Iron maiden Written Letter

Brilliant, Altair! thanks very much. I think I'll add the condom, definitely, and a few of the others. Thanks again! - [08:42 5 August] Sir FSt Don MafiaHatBlack.gif Yettie

Your welcome and anytime you need help with pictures just ask me, i'm pretty good at tracking them down.--User:Altair/sig 13:59, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 10 You used the concept of a polite young pedophile to the funniest extent that anyone could have. It was a hilarious article.
Concept: 7 The concept was pretty funny. Not awesome but a lot better than some of the other articles i've read so far.
Prose and formatting: 6 Your writing style, grammar, spelling were all very professional. Good job. However, I think that you could have put more into the ending of the article. It was quick and funny, but seemed inconsistent with the narrator's slow explanatory style of speech.
Images: 7 You could have used a different caption for the iron maiden instead of using a sentence from the article. You did that pretty well with the other two images you used, but they could have been funnier than just telling us what they are. The first one easily has the funniest caption.
Miscellaneous: 7.3
Final Score: 37.3 Overall i thought it was a pretty good article, but that you could have used the captions for the pictures to a funnier extent.
Reviewer: --User:Altair/sig 23:57, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
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