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WarWalrus (talk) 15:11, September 18, 2013 (UTC)

Humour: 9 Very well done. Extremely funny. Having never seen the film the Seventh Seal I presume that it either is not about seals or it is not at least about dodgy and murderous seals.
Concept: 8 Brilliant. You knew what you were talking about and took to it well. Only thing that could improve it would be more paragraphs and longer paragraphs, i.e more content but apart from that it was all good.
Prose and formatting: 6 *Capital letter for "swedish" on opening intro. Capital letter for "english" in image caption.
  • Loving the complicated vocab making it sound very encyclopedic as though an English scholar wrote it!
  • Be careful with lists that could attract unwanted additions by IPs. This voice over list is not too bad however I could see some idiot writing in a hundred more seals, "Bob the Seal" "Seal 101" "Seal 1000929378." You get the point.
Images: 7 Funny images. One more needed at the bottom I think though.
Miscellaneous: 7.5 Average Score
Final Score: 37.5 Very good. Great article and probably deserves a picture. Just a bit more content if anything especially for last few sections. Well done.
Reviewer: Sir ScottPat (talk) White Ensign Scotland Flag 1 Compassrose VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 17:25, September 30, 2013 (UTC)
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