I hope to replace the existing article (which, um, sucks) with this. If anyone cares to give any suggestions for making it even more better (which construction is actually correct here if you suss it out, grammar boy), great!
TPLN 19:00, 22 January 2009 (UTC)
Fairly funny, but nothing spectacular
It's about a reasonably well-know real world thing, and because they sucked balls most of their history it has a lot of comedic potential.
Prose and formatting:
Good, but not great. Solid writing.
Good images, but nothing really super great I guess. Perhaps one more picture would be good. And the captions are good, don't change them.
You get a bonus point here for calling Tony Dungy 'God'.
A potentially really solid article that needs some work. Now, if you could do me a solid (or, 'favor', as they are called, could you perhaps Pee Review my article on Gravity's Rainbow? As you're at very least aware of Thomas Pynchon, I think it would be something you'd enjoy. Thanks if you do so.