Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:TheLedBalloon/UnNews

Well, here's my latest UnNews. Whaddaya think? - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 21:07, Dec 13

Humour:	7.5	Pretty funny. A good laugh here or there.
Concept:	6.9	Alright concept. I'd rather an actual town name in Massachusetts than just "Boringplace." Possibilities: Ludlow, Orange, Freetown, Brewster, Rehoboth, Winchendon, Dighton, Chilmark, Aquinnah (formerly Gay Head until 1998), and my personal favorite, Cummington, which is best known for being the discovery point of a mineral named after the town, which bears the delightful name of "Cummingtonite."
Prose and formatting:	7.9	Good, but I'd like a bit better formatting, some more stylistic touches. Big blocks of text with no stylistic changes make me lose focus. Because I'm a jerk like that.
Images:	8.3	There are images, and they're good. Maybe move one to the left, though?
Miscellaneous:	7.7	Nothing to report. Averaged using Template:Pee.
Final Score:	38.3	Good! Very good. To be honest, most of these scores were fairly arbitrary. Sorry.
Reviewer:	Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 22:33, 13 December 2007 (UTC)