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Well, here's my latest UnNews. Whaddaya think? - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 21:07, Dec 13

Humour: 7.5 Pretty funny. A good laugh here or there.
Concept: 6.9 Alright concept. I'd rather an actual town name in Massachusetts than just "Boringplace." Possibilities: Ludlow, Orange, Freetown, Brewster, Rehoboth, Winchendon, Dighton, Chilmark, Aquinnah (formerly Gay Head until 1998), and my personal favorite, Cummington, which is best known for being the discovery point of a mineral named after the town, which bears the delightful name of "Cummingtonite."
Prose and formatting: 7.9 Good, but I'd like a bit better formatting, some more stylistic touches. Big blocks of text with no stylistic changes make me lose focus. Because I'm a jerk like that.
Images: 8.3 There are images, and they're good. Maybe move one to the left, though?
Miscellaneous: 7.7 Nothing to report. Averaged using Template:Pee.
Final Score: 38.3 Good! Very good. To be honest, most of these scores were fairly arbitrary. Sorry.
Reviewer: Contestant buzzer Contestant CUN -- VFH NotM Buzz Ctrbs 22:33, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
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