OK, I got a decent review from OEJ a little while ago and have been improving(I hope) the page. Please tell me what you think. What's good? What isn't? What could be better? What should I fix? Why am I so full of questions? Why don't I know the answer to that question? Thanks in advance, - P.M., WotM, & GUN,Sir Led Balloon(Tick Tock)(Contribs) 03:29, Oct 17
Finally I get to do a review on you. Abandon all hope, ye who enter here ! Bwaa haa ha!
This was funny. It especially struck resonance with me because this is EXACTLY the sort of stunts I myself would pull in school...i was a bad boy...(indian people. they smell...pure evil/insightfulness)
Concept is brilliant. 'nuff said.
Prose and formatting:
all good. I did a quick proofread and it looks good
you are the first person to EVER get a '10' out of me....very nice pics AND captions
i always put 10's here, so this line doesn't count. NOT APPLICABLE
see comments below
HOLY SHIT, This is my 2nd review today, and both are STERLING (Capt Ben was the other one i did today)...I was SO hoping to shred your little ego and cast you down with the rest of the slime, but somehow you managed to evade my evil desires...how DARE you. I think the only thing i would change is the ending...my idea (take it or leave it)...would be to have the subject start thinking about next year's fair...which would have to do with VOODOO dolls...Honestly LB, this one made me laugh quite a few times...this one is also ready for VFH ...so go submit it. =