So on to the writing style - convoluted, contrived, confusing, and many other con words. Much like watching a prequel created to an otherwise long established series which neglects so many parts of the original series in order to create a commercial success that modernises it to appeal to the kiddies who have grown up expecting CGI in their movies. In other words it matches the tone of the original prequel perfectly. Maybe it goes a little too far at times, but given I haven't gotten around to watching the source material yet and I was still able to follow it.
Well thought out and executed. Reads like a script but also reads like a parody.
Didn't notice any, but have a few reviews to do so may have missed the odd one or two. I think you missed a few backwards Rs in the Russian though.
Grammar issues are intentional as they are dialogue fitting to the characters.
It takes a bit to get through it in one sitting, and possibly could be broken up a little more, but I actually enjoyed going through it the way it was.
Yeah, ignore that last bit.
I can't really fault it. I didn't fall off my chair and say Wow at it, but I also couldn't find an issue with it. Cleverly composed.