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ManiacJaSg-Maniac1075Complain Here 16:44, August 23, 2014 (UTC)

Added 16:44, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
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I'm not sure this article is even working. It sounded funny at first thinking about how J5 would scream Input for sex, but i'm starting to wonder if it's just a joke used too much, and if it might have worked better just as a movie poster rather than a whole article?

edit Reviewed

Humour: 4 The jokes are really repetitive.
Concept: 5 The repeated joke killed the whole concept.
Prose and formatting: 9 The formatting is okay, make sure to proofread in case I'm wrong.
Images: 9 The pictures were the funniest part.
Miscellaneous: 5 I like the idea for an article on this movie. You could've done more with it. For example: The robot is struck by lightning and becomes more human. You could've taken that and mocked the producers for that. How does a shorted circuit make a robot more human?
Final Score: 32 Don't delete this article entirely, keep trying to write. I look forward to reading later edits of this page, as the images got some laughs out of me.
Reviewer: BrokenKnives (talk) 18:49, March 30, 2015 (UTC)
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