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Egyptian humour. Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool Egypt_orb_spinning.gif 07:51, May, 21 '09

Humour: 7 You do the whole "belligerent taxi driver" thing very well, which is obviously where most of the humor comes from. This, on its own, is pretty funny, though you probably want to expand it and take a number of other comedic angles as well. Unfortunately, I have no suggestions as to what those might be, but you're fairly amusing, so I'm sure you can figure something out.
Concept: 6 It's alright conceptually; the concept can basically be boiled down to "person interviews a stereotype," which is both good and bad in the fact that it's very general. On the plus side, this means you can do a lot with it. On the negative side, it means that this doesn't come off as being very original.
Prose and formatting: 5 There are some misspellings, which are intentional, so you don't lose any points there. However, this article is just so damn short. If you're going to want to do anything with this, I would suggest expanding it at least two-fold.
Images: 0 You have no images, and therefore no points for images. You can at least get a picture of both the reporter and the taxidriver--surely you can do that at least.
Miscellaneous: 7 Average-ish
Final Score: 25 Basically, expand this in more ways than one (see above comments).
Reviewer: Unführer Guildy Ritter von Guildensternenstein 15:12, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
Driveby: I like it very much, but I'm from the same neighborhood, I got a feeling that non middle-easterns wouldn't get it as much. I am thinking about making an audio though...~Jewriken.GIF 15:18, 23 May 2009 (UTC)
i have no sound software or hardware, other than the headphone's mic if it counts as one. Also, I never did an audio before.. Maybe you can do it yourself, or we can wait until summer and ill see if i can buy some sound shit and see what i can do Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool Egypt_orb_spinning.gif 10:22 May 24 '09
Um. I'm pretty sure Mordillo was talking about himself doing the audio. Also, nice article! Sir SockySexy girls Mermaid with dolphin Tired Marilyn Monroe (talk) (stalk)Magnemite Icons-flag-be GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 12:48, 24 May 2009 (UTC)
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