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In depth please. Thanks. --Tophat headless 02:30, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Humour: 7.5 You were able to fit several laugh out loud moments into such a short article.
Concept: 10 Great use of blacked out text! It gave the article a very "censored" feel, as you point out in the first word of the piece: "censorship". The fact that you left such a small amount of text visable to the reader was very well done satire.
Prose and formatting: 10 What little text I could see all seemed to be spelled correctly and properly punctuated.
Images: 0 There were no images. Maybe you should include a picture of a smiling child with the caption blacked out? I like images.
Miscellaneous: 8 I loved the length of this article. Very succinct and to the point.
Final Score: 35.5 I really liked this articles.
Reviewer: -- Brigadier General Sir Zombiebaron 06:01, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
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