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edit User:LuMontyZ/Fire Emblem: Abridged

A non-"gamecruft," descriptive version of the original. Besides a general review I'd like some feedback if this is even worth pursuing/publishable (with or without work).

Lu 06:06, January 16, 2014 (UTC)

Added 06:06, January 16, 2014 (UTC)
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The article is quite good, when we talk about mundane stuff such as grammar, formatting and utilisation of images. All these have been done well, and the article on the whole looks polished and well-made. Then, we come across to the content, which sadly fails to live up to expectations. Firstly, to really appreciate this article's humour, you need to have a understanding of the topic, which many people may not have. Second, I am of the opinion that the length must be managed: Even for an article encapsulating multiple releases of a game series, this article is 'way too long' , and gradually gets boring. I would suggest that you manage the length of the article, and insert in humor that doesn't always pertain to the characteristics of the game series, because it is rather hard to understand those. Out of a possible score of 10, I bestow upon this article a score of 5. --Vavaunni (talk) 15:30, January 4, 2015 (UTC)

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