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Well, this isn't done yet. But to whoever picks this one up: Thanks for reviewing my article! --Hyperbole 04:19, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 9 It wasn't the funniest article I've ever read, but it gave me the chuckles nonetheless.
Concept: 10 I would never have thought to have an article like that. Excellent!
Prose and formatting: 10 No mistakes that I could detect.
Images: 10 Not too many images, not too few, and they all worked with the article. Maybe put one or two on the left side.
Miscellaneous: 9 Instead of the "Conclusion" section at the bottom, I would use a "See Also". And forget the "Thanks for reading the article!" because it makes you seem like a suck-up.
Final Score: 48 Overall, an excellent article that needs a minor touch-up at the end.
Reviewer: -Velosi-T 21:55, 15 July 2008 (UTC) Woohoo, my first review!! YEY!
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