I've always thought Snake has many funny “qualities". You've managed to exploit them in this article very well. I really loved the section on Snake's smoking addiction/weakness. Whether or not that's true i don't know, but it was funny as hell. So, overall the humor was spot on.
I don't know how original this article is, but the info you presented was hilarous. Considering how seroius Snake is in his games, your ideas of making fun of that fact were fuckin' awesome.
Prose and formatting:
I think the way you organized the article really helped its humor. For example, to go from a heading about boxes to smoking is very fun. I didn't see any major spelling or grammar mistakes, so it was all good.
As far as pictures goes, I felt a sense of something maybe missing. I think maybe you should add an edited photo or two. However, the box photo and caption were very funny, and so was the Snake drawing.
I'm giving this category a 10 because I don't understand what the hell it is. So, since i liked everything else I'm going to assume whatever this is was great too.
Since you've reviewed me sooo many times i thought i'd return the favor. In closing, everything in this article i liked. My only suggestion would be to add an edited photo or two.