Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Hyperbole/Mind games (take two)
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Well, my first pee review on this article did yield an opinion, and that opinion was, apparently, that I should go fuck myself. Oh, and I did learn that "not anyone on the planet is male" - that came as a surprise.
So... any ideas on how to improve the article? --Hyperbole 15:33, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
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Nobody on this planet is male. • <17:01, 05 Jul 2008>
|Humour:||8||Comin' atcha from 104.1 KJEK. I see you have many articles on VFH, most of which probably won't make it for some reason that I'm not seeing. Maybe I'm not cut out to evaluate articles for VFH, but if it were up to me, I've seen worse articles featured than the ones you have up there. Oh well, they can be resubmitted. Also, this is a bad time for VFH anyway. The only ones getting featured are a month old. I'd say wait until all your articles are gone (featured or otherwise) before nomming.
|Concept:||9||Jealous of your idea. Okay, let's spitball.
|Prose and formatting:||6||looks good, but it's short, so this is how I will deduct points.|
|Images:||7||I suggest using that image of the confused woman over and over again for each section. That would work pretty well comedically. Repetition, my boy: repetition.|
|Final Score:||37.5||Obviously, even though it's short, it looks fab-u-louuuusss! But not in a gay way. Be proud: for I have not reviewed anything in, like, three weeks.|
|Reviewer:||• <17:29, 05 Jul 2008>|