Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Hyperbole/Don't vote for my dog!
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So I co-wrote this with an evil genius who doesn't want any credit for his work. Therefore, SysRQ will remain anonymous.
I guess my big question is: did I improve the original or just fuck it up? 19:03, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
|Humour:||10||I'm not going to bother breaking this down, because it was hilarious. In response to your question about the original, though, I think that your expansion (particularly on the red ball/blue ball) greatly enhanced the article and made it even better than it was. Also, I rarely laugh when I read things (even if I find them funny) and this is one of the first times I've ever done so. Full points.|
|Concept:||9||Not voting for dogs is a good idea.|
|Prose and formatting:||8||The pictures could use some size adjustments. The first one on top is way too big and it dwarfs the accompanying text. The second picture also cuts your section so that there's one setence left underneath it. Either somehow move the image, or just get rid of this line to make it look prettier. Prose, however, is just fine the way it is.|
|Images:||9||Cute dog, except the eyes are a little bit irritating... I guess you probably can't do that much about that, but if someone with Potatochopping skills could fix his eyes to look normal, it'd be nice.|
|Final Score:||45||I'm not voting for your stupid, gay, liberal dog, and I never will. Screw your dog, he's a jackass.|
|Reviewer:||--mrmonkey72 20:24, 29 July 2008 (UTC)|
Also, if you move this to mainspace, I'll nominate it (or vote for it) on VFH. Although this could be best saved to be highlighted when election day is near... --mrmonkey72 20:26, 29 July 2008 (UTC)