Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Hyperbole/Adorable minorities
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No pictures yet, and obviously unfinished. What I mostly want to know is: is it funny, or just kind of racist?02:35, 18 February 2009 (UTC)
I like the direction you are going - I will review this, if you like, with that in mind; that it is a sort of pre-pee review. Obviously it isn't ready for prime time. But it is adorable.
|Humour:||8||I think overall it is very funny. Only a couple of jokes I would personally leave out, maybe just a matter of taste, but the Velcro line is not funny for instance. I'll also whine about some missed humor opportunities:|
Oh oh oh - and one more thing - I especially like the "how to identify" parts. This I think is what gives this concept its best opportunity for humor.
|Concept:||8||I love the concept, and you are hereby given leave to expand it on my command.|
|Prose and formatting:||6||Nothing spectacular here, but as I see this as a WIP, I will allow for some leeway in this regard. More of that Uncyc "articliness" is needed.|
|Miscellaneous:||8||Eight here is for the encouragement to just do it, as far as I'm concerned.|
|Final Score:||30||This is a nice humorous idea that can survive being extended, and ought to be. The adorable Asian, the adorable Indian (both kinds), a note about how there has never been any known adorable Muslim might be funny, etc.|
|Reviewer:||TPLN 03:17, 18 February 2009 (UTC)|
I would keep the Velcro line. IronLung 21:37, 18 February 2009 (UTC)