Bhind45 05:05, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
||Made me chuckle sometimes, but too much stupidness, and swearing. It wasn't at all clever, exept for the Neil Patrick Harris thing.
||Funny concept, but could use some developing. Focus more on how Lois is probably the most annoying character on T.V.
|Prose and formatting:
||Lots of misspellings, and did not flow well. Very good formatting though.
||Good, funny images
||Not really any miscellaneous
||Overall, this was lacking in everything except for pictures and concept. I would suggest spending more time on it, and getting more ideas from other people.
||--Jim C. Thomas 02:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC)