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Bhind45 05:05, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Humour: 5 Made me chuckle sometimes, but too much stupidness, and swearing. It wasn't at all clever, exept for the Neil Patrick Harris thing.
Concept: 8 Funny concept, but could use some developing. Focus more on how Lois is probably the most annoying character on T.V.
Prose and formatting: 5 Lots of misspellings, and did not flow well. Very good formatting though.
Images: 9 Good, funny images
Miscellaneous: 10 Not really any miscellaneous
Final Score: 37 Overall, this was lacking in everything except for pictures and concept. I would suggest spending more time on it, and getting more ideas from other people.
Reviewer: --Jim C. Thomas 02:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
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