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Oh man, this was... kinda fun to write! Is it fun to read? Uh, that's... another story. It represents my ode to the documentary Cosmos by Carl Sagan. It's been reviewed by OEJ, who liked it. --  Le Cejak <-> 00:52, 30 October 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 no laugh-out-loud stuff, but well written with appropriate amounts of chuckles.
Concept: 10 great concept, as an astronomer myself i label this article "awesome".
Prose and formatting: 7 some of the sections are a little short, but if that's intentional then you shouldn't change it.
Images: 11 these images with their captions are amazing, particularly the dog in a pimp costume.
Miscellaneous: 7 the first two 'did you know' templates are good, the last is kind of weak.
Final Score: 43 this was, in fact, a lot of fun to read. the musical parts work quite well. the creation:the musical part is kind of random, with jellyfish fighting the american revolution and stuff. maybe try to follow the general themes of actual creationism: the flood, adam & eve, all the incest, etc. otherwise it gets the Gerry seal of maximum approval!
Reviewer: --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 21:58, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
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