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Something I thought of playing with on VFH near the first of the year, just before Uncy's 6th anniversary on January 5th. But the site may top-off by then. Thanks. No hurry either, just let Rupert linger, watch the clouds go by. Aleister 2:19 11 12

This seems to have been reviewed, see the edit page and there it is, but it hasn't come to the page. I will see if I can expose it. Thanks for the review! Aleister 2:37 14 12
Humour: 8 A rather effective blend of satire, sarcasm, and total nonsense. My only suggestion would be that you should chanfe the last few sentences, as I found that it left something to be desired, but other than that, very funny.
Concept: 10 A new and original idea, not one similar article on the whole site (in my personal opinion). You did a great job of making Rupert look like a total dillweed.
Prose and formatting: 8 Excelent use of sophisticated language alltogether. Was one of the few articles that used the in-jokes properly, without making them glaringly obvious. My complaint is that I thought that the brackets to indicate actions were a tad confusing.
Images: 6 This part was what stopped the article from being Article Of The Day worthy. The third had a humorous caption, but tje other two seemed to be glaring mistakes in the article.
Miscellaneous: 8.5 As I have no real idea what that should mean, I just gave the average score.
Final Score: 40.5 40.5 total. A fresh idea that was full of laughs. Just fix up the images and I will give you a VTH.
Reviewer: Z3R0 H0UR.
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