Something I thought of playing with on VFH near the first of the year, just before Uncy's 6th anniversary on January 5th. But the site may top-off by then. Thanks. No hurry either, just let Rupert linger, watch the clouds go by. Aleister 2:19 11 12
This seems to have been reviewed, see the edit page and there it is, but it hasn't come to the page. I will see if I can expose it. Thanks for the review! Aleister 2:37 14 12
A rather effective blend of satire, sarcasm, and total nonsense. My only suggestion would be that you should chanfe the last few sentences, as I found that it left something to be desired, but other than that, very funny.
A new and original idea, not one similar article on the whole site (in my personal opinion). You did a great job of making Rupert look like a total dillweed.
Prose and formatting:
Excelent use of sophisticated language alltogether. Was one of the few articles that used the in-jokes properly, without making them glaringly obvious. My complaint is that I thought that the brackets to indicate actions were a tad confusing.
This part was what stopped the article from being Article Of The Day worthy. The third had a humorous caption, but tje other two seemed to be glaring mistakes in the article.
As I have no real idea what that should mean, I just gave the average score.
40.5 total. A fresh idea that was full of laughs. Just fix up the images and I will give you a VTH.