Audio: While I get the joke I just don’t find it as hilarious as Multilit did. And it suffers from being the only joke. Take a look at Weird Al’s This Song’s Just Six Words Long (you tube vid) he manages to satirise repetitive songs without being repetitive himself. If you were to try and do something like this again, it’ll work a lot better if you tried something like that. However I did enjoy the actuall music, it just wasn’t laugh out loud funny.
Dealt with above, you only have the one idea and not much else.
Prose and formatting:
Can’t fault the formatting much except that maybe you could left align every second band member image, makes it look nicer I think and will reduce some of the white space.
Very good use of images! They were funny in and of themselves really and calling the bear Muhammad was a nice little touch. I liked the bar thing you had at the top too, filled in what would have been white space and looked good.
Averaged, got a weird number so rounded to two DP.
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Please don’t be discouraged! As I said I like the music and it’s good to have someone around here that can do it to a high standard. I just don’t think this is particularly funny. Oh and hard lines with the other song I nommed, I really liked that one!