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edit UnTunes:A song by a n00b

My third article, I decided to take a break from what I was doing to create this. Comments? --User:The Improver/sig21:05, Apr 15 2008 (UTC)

I took a crack at it. I apologise. Hope you can glue it back together. VGD >=3 00:29, 16 April 2008 (UTC)
Humour: 9 It's funny because newbs don't know the rules and get their articles deleted all the time here. Or maybe that makes it all too familiar? Not sure where this could be improved, maybe a picture? (see Images)
Concept: 9 The noob can make a song that ends up on a Top 100 list, but they can't make a decent article? Hilarious. Again,possibly too familiar to be funny.
Prose and formatting: 9 Marked down for the occasional spelling mistake (should be its, not it's) and a sentence fragment (Dropping the song down to #97 in the Top 100 chart.) but otherwise spot on. (I think)
Images: 5 No pictures? For shame. Maybe you could have a picture of this noob strumming a guitar?
Miscellaneous: 8 Avg'd as per Pee Review requirements.
Final Score: 40 I think it was pretty good. I'm sorry if I didn't explain enough, this is my first time doing a Pee Review.
Reviewer: Isshiki Kotonashi-tono =3 | Talk! | IMRAC! | Sign! | Play! | Courtier Isshiki FBu! 00:27, 16 April 2008 (UTC) (Again, sorry for not elaborating.)

Driveby commenting: How about some audio? Audio is the only thing that distinguishes UnTunes from UnPoetia, and separates us from the monkeys. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 00:47, Apr 16

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