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Smells like vitcory --Sir General Minister G5 FIYC UPotM [Y] #21 F@H KUN 14:20, 13 July 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 3 I honestly just didn't find it that funny. You need some real jokes in here. You can go with the 'Teen Movie' idea, but it could use a rehaul.
Concept: 3 Weren't there already movies... about teen movies? And stuff? You didn't really stick to parodying the genre, anyway, it kind of got random and pointless there for a while.
Prose and formatting: 4 Ask a grammar and spelling nazi to help you on this one.
Images: 4 Images are either unrelated or just completely unnecessary and unfunny.
Miscellaneous: 8 If this was meant to look like it was written by a dumb teenager, it did suceeed at that.
Final Score: 22 Legitimately needs a lot of work and some actual jokes. Just sounds like you were huffing kittens at the time you wrote it, or you hired a ten year old ghostwriter. Though, honestly, it was probably funnier than Epic Movie or Meet the Spartans was, so good job on that.
Reviewer: --Mrmonkey72 21:38, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
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