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My first solo venture into unscriptland. Opinions??? --THE 14:58, 19 July 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 8 I laughed all the way through it.
Concept: 9 Very nicely done. At the beginning, I thought the premise might wear thin by the end. However, the
Prose and formatting: 8 Well written; a little proofreading might help. As a minor point, I'd use square brackets instead of round brackets when you're breaking dialog to describe action, but maybe that's just me.
Images: 0 No images
Miscellaneous: 8 The miscellaneous aspects of this script are pretty damned miscellaneous if you ask me.
Final Score: 33 I love this article. Find some suitable images, and I think you've got something VFH worthy here.
Reviewer: --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 06:54, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
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