My first solo venture into unscriptland. Opinions??? --THE 14:58, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
8
I laughed all the way through it.
Concept:
9
Very nicely done. At the beginning, I thought the premise might wear thin by the end. However, the
Prose and formatting:
8
Well written; a little proofreading might help. As a minor point, I'd use square brackets instead of round brackets when you're breaking dialog to describe action, but maybe that's just me.
Images:
0
No images
Miscellaneous:
8
The miscellaneous aspects of this script are pretty damned miscellaneous if you ask me.
Final Score:
33
I love this article. Find some suitable images, and I think you've got something VFH worthy here.
