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Hi! I'm submitting this here before I submit it to VFH. I'd enjoy some suggestions for improvement and maybe some collaboration. ~[ths] UotM Eclipse Craproll MotM BePrepared 23:38, 05/28/2012

Funny, imnho, but I would advise against making the poems obviously yours (by signing the first and last ones). --Qzekrom sig trans Sir CuteArceusOnTheRadio [CUNPBJ'12PLS(0)] 00:49, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
@Dan I would review this article, but I don't really have the time. So for now I'll just say that I would like someone to review this article, and I'll also agree with what Qzek said, and I'd also say that it needs more cowbell (and more ponies) -- NotReallyMyUsernameOnTheRadıo 2012-05-29T05:37
Add an AAAAAAA poem, plz. --Qzekrom sig trans Sir CuteArceusOnTheRadio [CUNPBJ'12PLS(0)] 19:46, May 29, 2012 (UTC)
I would review this, but since I got SATs coming up, not yet. GiratinaOriginForme |Si Plebius Dato' (Sir) Joe ang Pinoy CUN|IC Kill 800px-Flag of the Philippines svg | 10:59, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
I'll do this. A (Ruins) 17:58, June 4, 2012 (UTC)
Humour: 3 Could be funnier. Like a rickroll reference, for instance. Or a brony reference. (But I wouldn't think you'd do that)
Concept: 7.5 This is a great concept. However, trying to cram all of the Internet's stupidity and awesomeness into haiku, again, is a very hard task. Concept good, the way you exploited the concept, meh.
Prose and formatting: 10 It's Haiku, you can't fail at formatting Haiku.
Miscellaneous: 0 N/A
Final Score: 20.5 Needs more mainstream references, meme images, and overall remake of humor concept. Shoot for more pointed humor.
Reviewer: A (Ruins)

edit After the Pee

Have we added an All Your Base related haiku, or a HaikuAbout CamelCase? --Qzekrom sig trans Sir CuteArceusOnTheRadio [CUNPBJ'12PLS(0)] 21:51, June 6, 2012 (UTC)

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