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edit UnNews:Nintendo World Championship Gold Cartridge found inside puppy

ZeMacroKiller98 (talk) 08:09, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

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Article is very vunny. An updated pic with the new game that had Mario labeled on its ripped off face. That might be fun. One can blame patchs for the Pen he also sallowed. The dog writes in its bowls... NOt sure if that is funnier. BUt their is a new picture of this holy grail game out there. ALSO the whole time I read the article I felt concerned for the video games safety. Was it gonna be OK, Will the dog shit affect its proformance. That poor video game. Also , what level of mario can the dog reach?


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Very much so I thought. The dog ate a game. HOLY MOLY the mother of all nintendo games. And this game has been poping up in the bonafide news alot of late so very good concept.

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I could read it flawlessly with no trouble whatso ever. Very well formated for mental digestion.


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Yes good images. One of the dog and one of the game. Perfect. I've left one comment about images about.


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Does this patchs have any history of eating other video games?


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Great article already I hope my suggestions offer reassurance of what is already good and inspiration to refine the finer details into funtonium

OMGwhatHaveIdone (talk) 07:03, February 7, 2014 (UTC)
This was a Pee Review by OMGwhatHaveIdone (talk) 07:03, February 7, 2014 (UTC)
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