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You know what to do. - UnIdiot | GUN | Talk | Contribs - 04:48, Apr 23

Though The Improver reserved this Pee Review, he/she/it/Abominable Snowman has not yet completed it.

You may claim the review by replacing his/her/its/Abominable Snowman's name with yours.

I'm on it! --User:The Improver/sig21:24, Apr 23 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 8 I'd admit. I kinda liked it. It described the lives of a common rock band. I also liked the Genericy you putted into it. You also hid some metahumor in it. That was good, especially the More Marketable Younger Band, most of all. It reminded me of insert title here. But can you try to add some more comments from fans in there, especially making conflicts between how good they are and how greedy they are. That's all, but overall it was good.
Concept: 9 I kinda like the idea of a generic band and the way you did it made me enjoy it. This section needs no fixing up.
Prose and formatting: 8 You kinda got the news feeling there. I do like the expositional fan comments and the commentary. I also see that you have spot on grammar and spelling. Nice job!
Images: 7 You made good usage of the images here, I kinda liked the picture where the bands faces are blurred but I don't think the "The Infamous Another Album World Tour." works here. Hey, it's my opinion.
Miscellaneous: 8 Averaged via Pee Review Guidelines.
Final Score: 40 I had to say, I wasn't expecting a great article. But I found one here. The premise is good and remindable of insert title here, almost like a homage, and clearly the humor is there and the pop-culture refrences are interweaved pretty well. This article might be perfect for VFH. But you might want to get a second opinion, as I have one opinion. There are many others that could give advice on this article as well. Got any comments, leave them on my talk page. Good luck at VFH!
Reviewer: User:The Improver/sig04:58, Apr 24 2008 (UTC)
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