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another unnews gerry? give it a rest, already. --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 22:50, 4 October 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 Starts slowly, but gains momentum later. Some really good lines and ideas, possibly too self-referential for non-contributors.
Concept: 7 OK, this one dropped out of left field[1], but it kind of works.
Prose and formatting: 9 Well written as ever, nothing glaring here.
Images: 8 Again, a decent job. Relevant images to the story. Nice.
Miscellaneous: 8 This is a tough one to mark - I like it, but as I said, it feels maybe a bit 'in-jokey'.
Final Score: 39 The self-referential nature might count against it on VFH (although my track record on such pronouncements has been lacking recently). It is a very good Un-News though, and once again a very enjoyable read. Good work!
Reviewer: --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 19:08, 15 October 2007 (UTC)


Further thoughts: I guess you could play around with expanding the reason why an overcooked tuber re-entering the planet's atmosphere would cause such catastrophic damage? I'm sure with your background you could flesh this out a bit - it left me scratching my head a tad, and wondering if you'd wrapped it up quickly as your shift was coming to an end or something! Other than that, I can't make many more suggestions for this, it seems fine as it is. --Sir Under User (Hi, How Are You?) VFH KUN 19:08, 15 October 2007 (UTC)

  1. Your job, yeah, I get that.
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