another unnews gerry? give it a rest, already. --SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 22:50, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
7
Starts slowly, but gains momentum later. Some really good lines and ideas, possibly too self-referential for non-contributors.
Concept:
7
OK, this one dropped out of left field[1], but it kind of works.
Prose and formatting:
9
Well written as ever, nothing glaring here.
Images:
8
Again, a decent job. Relevant images to the story. Nice.
Miscellaneous:
8
This is a tough one to mark - I like it, but as I said, it feels maybe a bit 'in-jokey'.
Final Score:
39
The self-referential nature might count against it on VFH (although my track record on such pronouncements has been lacking recently). It is a very good Un-News though, and once again a very enjoyable read. Good work!
Further thoughts: I guess you could play around with expanding the reason why an overcooked tuber re-entering the planet's atmosphere would cause such catastrophic damage? I'm sure with your background you could flesh this out a bit - it left me scratching my head a tad, and wondering if you'd wrapped it up quickly as your shift was coming to an end or something! Other than that, I can't make many more suggestions for this, it seems fine as it is. --SirUnder User(Hi,HowAreYou?)VFHKUN 19:08, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
