Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Swine Flu: Murderer, or misunderstood organism?

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edit UnNews:Swine Flu: Murderer, or misunderstood organism?

Helloo, basically I was quite pleased with this one, although I'd like to know what sort of changes I could make to make it so everyone is pleased with it. The grammar used is pretty much English - I think.

Sir Sunbeam no u F@H KUN 06:19, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 7.5 Not laugh-out-loud funny, but that's not really the point of this one - it's a witty and interesting "different take" on a current issue which works well as an UnNews piece.
Concept: 8 Original and well-constructed.
Prose and formatting: 6 The format would be much improved with the addition of a second image to break up the text a little. Otherwise, spot-on.
Images: 7 As already stated, another would help. Something to illustrate the "weaker members" of society that the virus attacks, perhaps...maybe a picture of Cherie Blair, who is thought to have been infected, with a caption along the lines of "Swine 'Flu is known to be particularly prevalent amongst the most worthless members of society."
Miscellaneous: 8 I like this article a lot, for its originality and wittiness. .
Final Score: 36.5 Not everybody will enjoy it as much as I did but sod 'em. Add another picture for the reasons I've already given and I'd give it higher scores all round.
Reviewer: Rabbi Techno Icons-flag-gb kvetch Icon rabbi Contribs Foxicon FOXES 09:18, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
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