my first article in a while, looking for a quick review to see how much more rust i have to shake off. thanks in advance. SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 18:20, 13 February 2009 (UTC)
The article really doesn't contain much humor, neither in its concept nor in its content. Some lines of the article, such as horse-drawn carts being powered by whale blubber, actually were funny. The only problem is only 1 or 2 lines in the entire article were funny at all.
The concept of DST being the cause of global warming is creative, but it really doesn't make for a funny/satirical article.
Prose and formatting:
I found no misspellings in the article, and it was formatted well.
Suits the topic of the article fairly well.
The article has a good concept, but lacks the amount of humor and/or satire needed to make a notable Uncyclopedia article. Not bad, though.