Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:School Counselor Almost Actually Acommplishes Something

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edit UnNews:School Counselor Almost Actually Accomplishes Something

Though this isn't one of my personal favorites that I've written, people seem to enjoy it, so I'd appreciate a Pee Review with tweaks. It doesn't have to be particularly in-depth, just a few tips would be fine. And yes, I originally misspelled the title of this article.

mrmonkey72 18:06, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 9.5 A good job of false information, litigation and lies, this article does well to spread the funny and what Fox news doesn't have the balls to print. We all know they want to though.
Concept: 8 You've got a great concept, most school counclers don't accomplish anything, and that's the good truth. Keep posting things like these, we need a good reporter like you.
Prose and formatting: 10 Your spelling and grammar are good, and an excellent job on formatting and writting. A few typos, but that's nothing a good whack to the typo fairy can't fix. Or just get your hands checked out.
Images: 6 A good image relating to the topic, but he could have been more insane. Good choice though.
Miscellaneous: 8 Overall I think you did well, and you keep on doing well, I'll give you a cookie! And you'll become Uncyclopedian of the month!
Final Score: 41.5 It's all been said brother. Do well, and go west.
Reviewer: --TheGreatLiquidFox 15:26, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
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