Trying to get back in the swing of writing. This is a warm-up, and is by no means good, but I like the idea. -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 03:12, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
||That's some cerebral, trippy stuff. I like dry humor, and while it isn't a laffer, it's a thinker. But it's NOT Thinkerer.
||A thrilling concept indeed. Well, not thrilling. But interesting.
|Prose and formatting:
||Short, but then again, I don't know how you'd expand it. Some minor typos and omitted words.
||There's just the one, and there's some potential for some good'ns. Like some NASA guys examining something. Or something.
||Brilliant Euroipods refference.
||Overall it's a good warm-up for what I'm sure will be a Jordan-esque comeback.
||-- » Sir Savethemooses Grand Commanding Officer ... holla atcha boy» 03:22, 4 January 2008 (UTC)
I thought it was really funny. Just add another picture or two, fix the few spelling errors and it'd be perfect.
--Blink 06:28, 6 January 2008 (UTC)