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Trying to get back in the swing of writing. This is a warm-up, and is by no means good, but I like the idea. -- §. | WotM | PLS | T | C | A 03:12, 4 January 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 8 That's some cerebral, trippy stuff. I like dry humor, and while it isn't a laffer, it's a thinker. But it's NOT Thinkerer.
Concept: 8 A thrilling concept indeed. Well, not thrilling. But interesting.
Prose and formatting: 8 Short, but then again, I don't know how you'd expand it. Some minor typos and omitted words.
Images: 4 There's just the one, and there's some potential for some good'ns. Like some NASA guys examining something. Or something.
Miscellaneous: 8 Brilliant Euroipods refference.
Final Score: 36 Overall it's a good warm-up for what I'm sure will be a Jordan-esque comeback.
Reviewer: -- Tinymooose.gif » Sir Savethemooses Grand Commanding Officer ... holla atcha boy» 03:22, 4 January 2008 (UTC)

I thought it was really funny. Just add another picture or two, fix the few spelling errors and it'd be perfect. --Blink 06:28, 6 January 2008 (UTC)

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