UnNews article that is almost as bizarre as the true story it is based on.
Darwin of suburbia 17:46, 20 July 2008 (UTC)
||Not really many jokes that weren't random past the headline.
||Status change is funny, but could use more elaboration to really push it through. Focus on the status change, and the article could be pretty hilarious.
|Prose and formatting:
||Definitely a lot of errors in spelling and grammar. Should be fixed to make it easier to read.
||You could use an image of a dog with a woman, too, with a creative caption. You can think of something.
||Congrats, you get an 8 because I don't have anything else to say.
||Needs some more jokes, emphasis on status change, and a complete rehauling of the spelling and grammar issues.
||--Mrmonkey72 20:55, 22 July 2008 (UTC)