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edit UnNews:Kangaroo rescues Dog from Woman

UnNews article that is almost as bizarre as the true story it is based on.

Darwin of suburbia 17:46, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 6 Not really many jokes that weren't random past the headline.
Concept: 6 Status change is funny, but could use more elaboration to really push it through. Focus on the status change, and the article could be pretty hilarious.
Prose and formatting: 2 Definitely a lot of errors in spelling and grammar. Should be fixed to make it easier to read.
Images: 5 You could use an image of a dog with a woman, too, with a creative caption. You can think of something.
Miscellaneous: 8 Congrats, you get an 8 because I don't have anything else to say.
Final Score: 27 Needs some more jokes, emphasis on status change, and a complete rehauling of the spelling and grammar issues.
Reviewer: --Mrmonkey72 20:55, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
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