Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Jimbo Wales doesn't believe in Santa Claus

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edit UnNews:Jimbo Wales doesn't believe in Santa Claus

My Christmas-themed article for the year. I've been working on it for months, and it's already been peed on twice. I just need some last minute tips. Is it lacking anywhere? Can it be made funnier or more satiricle? Should I remove one of the images? Et cedera. -- Kip > Talk Works Puzzle Potato Dry Brush CUN Icons-flag-us 10:02, 16 December 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 This is a very interesting article, as well as the fact that it is well written article. It's pretty funny, but sadly, I didn't LOL.
Concept: 7 Very interesting concept. No complaints, in other words, good
Prose and formatting: 8 I loved the girl messaging Jimbo Wales with her poor spelling/grammar. Also, nice use of templates such as {{cquote}}. It seems well formatted to me, though keep in mind, I don't teach grammar.
Images: 9 I loved the chops, all thanks to our friend Under user. I think the images don't need to be removed, unless you wan't them to be removed, but if I were to choose, I would remove the second on.
Miscellaneous: 7.5 avg'd via {{Pee}}
Final Score: 37.5 In all, good article. It appears that you put a great deal of work into this article. Work on the satire a bit more, and this might hit the front page (though I doubt it).
Reviewer: --Æ 15:06, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
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