This is not a particularly funny article. Once you get past the basic premise, there is little of further humour here. The same gag is told in different ways.
I really like the concept and being a big Father Ted fan, the whole idea tickled my fancy. I think the article was just the right length to avoid boredom
Prose and formatting:
A very good use of grammar and spelling. I couldn't spot any mistakes and even where i did, they turned out to be correct in any case e.g. work of His servants. I thought servants should be Servants but hey, you know better.
Just two carefully thought out images that add to the article. I don't know whether Cowen's face could have been darker to blend in???
This is my first review so please bear with me. I didn't want to just do an average score as i thought i would use this mark as an overall score thinga-me-jiggy.
I really liked the article and it is one that I would have read thoroughly if it came up as a random page. I listened to the audio file which i thought added an extra dimension and would be interested to know how you acheived that? As a noob(?) your advice would be appreciated.