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I really like this one, what do you think? Icons-flag-pi Pirate Lord__Sonic80 (Yell  •  Latest literary excretion) __ 19:16, 22 September 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 8 It was funny initially, but eventually the idea that people got kicked in the balls got a little annoying.
Concept: 8 I like the concept, but it's not the funniest I've ever seen.
Prose and formatting: 7 Yes, I am a picky prose editor, and you have several misplaced commas and capitalizations in that piece.
Images: 9 The image you have is just about perfect for this article. I gave it a 9 because it wasn't absolutely hilarious.
Miscellaneous: 8 Average score of all sections.
Final Score: 40 You have a good solid article, just spruce it up a little and it's ready for the front page news.
Reviewer: MafiaHatBrown Velosi-T Icons-flag-us {] Screech * Vomit * Mutilations [} 21:16, 27 September 2008 (UTC)
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