Just an average review. Nothing Special. Please grind my bones if not good.
Lord Serioch 22:14, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
Humour:
2
2 laughs. Don't take it personally, I don't laugh much (and it was a bit short).
Concept:
9
I reviewed it because the headline is magical. As with many UnNews stories, it's a great concept.
Prose and formatting:
7
Adequate. It wasn't poorly written, but it was somewhat short (again, a failing of a lot of UnNews articles).
Images:
5
Meh. Nothing really funny, nothing really original, but not horrible on either front, either.
Miscellaneous:
5
This article isn't VFH quality by any means, but it isn't VFD quality either. It's simply another addition to a solid UnNews section. The best part of the article is easily the title, and that's usually not a good sign, even though it really is a KILLER title.
Final Score:
28
Great title. Ok article. Lots of potential here, which is both a good thing and a bad thing, as potential is a word you never use for something that's outstanding. Spend some more time on das prosen (and maybe try to find some different images), and I think this could one day be VFH material. Of course, you COULD just move on to writing your next UnNews article, too. :) (That's usually what I do).
>> 16:04, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
