Just an average review. Nothing Special. Please grind my bones if not good.
Lord Serioch 22:14, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
2 laughs. Don't take it personally, I don't laugh much (and it was a bit short).
I reviewed it because the headline is magical. As with many UnNews stories, it's a great concept.
Prose and formatting:
Adequate. It wasn't poorly written, but it was somewhat short (again, a failing of a lot of UnNews articles).
Meh. Nothing really funny, nothing really original, but not horrible on either front, either.
This article isn't VFH quality by any means, but it isn't VFD quality either. It's simply another addition to a solid UnNews section. The best part of the article is easily the title, and that's usually not a good sign, even though it really is a KILLER title.
Great title. Ok article. Lots of potential here, which is both a good thing and a bad thing, as potential is a word you never use for something that's outstanding. Spend some more time on das prosen (and maybe try to find some different images), and I think this could one day be VFH material. Of course, you COULD just move on to writing your next UnNews article, too. :) (That's usually what I do).