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edit UnNews:East Antarctica breaks off, Americans still don't care

Jdude 04:08, 14 April 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 1.5 Errr... Riiight. The article is one that could potentially be funny. Even hilarious. However as it is now, the article is a stump of an article and to be frank, a bit boring. This is a stub, and a not so good such, either. Could use the {{Rewrite}} tag.

I don't find this article to be very funny. If I don't, the majority of random stumblers won't either. Try adding quality content which utilises the hilarity that ensues from just about everything America related. We should show our gratitude for that superpower's average IQ being what it is by taking it up whenever it is possible... :P

Concept: 4 The concept is good. However writing a oneliner or a single paragraph about something with great humour and parody potential seems like a waste of time and space. You could have made this something memorable and funny, even a bit high brow, considering Americans really don't care about the whole climate issue until it's way too late. Or you could have spent the time by going to the pub with your mates. Some alcohol might have made it a funnier article...
Prose and formatting: 1.5 The 1.0 is for coming up with the idea and writing a related topic. The 0.5 is for the prose, of which there's way too little. Elaborate, use fine, professional sounding lingo. Add a few "quotes" where Experts try make everyone take the thing seriously, for example. Brainstorm, do what it takes. Just add more content and keep the lingo appropriate for a science article.
Images: 4.5 Alright. The image is the best part of the article. However the image alone doesn't justify writing this short of an article. You should come up with a witty caption to support the image...
Miscellaneous: 2.9 Where are the links? This article could be riddled with blue links to Al Gore, the Greenhouse Effect, Global Warming, Dumb Americans and Whatnots, GE. Make a few friends. Intelligent humour and good spelling and grammar would make this article worth something... With a bit more content... Actually, a shitload more of content.
Final Score: 14.4 Content, content, content. It's too short to be a proper article. It's not even big enough to be a "telegram" news item.

And thanks to this article being a really short one, I had trouble coming up with enough to say about it. Not very funny...

Reviewer: -- Luverly - (Contribs) (Talk) Heart_anim.gif Icons-flag-gb Grammar Nazi, Mum , BFF & NotM, CUN , GMP . - Perkele! 15:16, 14 Apr
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