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Review away! This is a true story. - UnIdiot | GUN | Talk | Contribs - 20:55, Apr 3

Humour: 6.4 It was mainly a lot of chuckles. You managed to keep the idea fresh, instead of tiring it out.
Concept: 6.5 I thought it wasn't that original, but you put it in an UnNews article, and I haven't seen any other UnNews like this.
Prose and formatting: 7.4 There were a few question marks and apostrophes that needed to be there, but it was easy to read. I also liked how you stated what you would've done each paragraph if you remembered the idea. The use of CAPITAL BOLD FONT was very fitting.
Images: 7 The images, I guess, were fitting considering you DIDN'T REMEMBER THE TOPIC (how was that). I really liked that "ANOTHER FUCKING USELESS PICTURE" thingy.
Miscellaneous: 6.9 I really don't know what to put here.
Final Score: 34.2 This is a pretty good article, with possibility to be featured. But in order for it to be featured, I think you should fix some of the minor grammatical errors and maybe add an extra picture. I like this one. Keep it up.
Reviewer: --Fist of Judgement 01:47, 4 April 2008 (UTC)
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