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Ok, here it is. This article came as a result of me beginning to do a voiceover demo, and beginning with a few generic character types. The first one to come out was a storytelling shaman kind of a guy, and I was only going to do his voice for a few seconds and move on to the next. I ended up improving a whole bit on recording, and decided I may as well post it here. So as far as content, I don't plan on changing the text around much, but if there are any suggestions you can give to me on this, that would be great. (PS. Listen to the audio, it really is the backbone of the article.) -RAHB 23:27, 23 April 2008 (UTC)

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Why did I nominate this article? Let me count the ways...   Le Cejak <Apr 24, 2008 [13:08]>

Humour: 9 Holy crap, that was funny. True, I listened to the audio at the same time, but that's the charm of this article. I didn't give you a 10 because it does become predictable after a few sections. However, it picks up toward the end: good job! Plus those pictures: great job. The rambling shaman is the key to this article. Who knew that rambling on and on about nothing could be so hilarious?
Concept: 8 It's hard to predict at the beginning what this article was going to be about. Like I said, as one is reading this article (or listening this article), it becomes easier to see what will happen, but then the shaman guy starts talking about being mugged there, and all the rules go out the window!
Prose and formatting: 9 Basically perfect writing and reading.
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Images: 8 Loved the pictures.
Miscellaneous: 8.5 avgd
Final Score: 42.5 When I noticed you did an audio, I realized that, unless there was a glaring paragraph long error, there was no way to really redo this article. Along with that was the fact that I was giggling all the way through. ...I do that. ...Giggling, that is. ...In the land where the sun shines not. ...I don't want people seeing me giggle.
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <Apr 24, 2008 [13:17]>
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