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Looking to get a few things answered. Is the length good, or should I add another section or two? Does my wording/language stay consistant throughout, and is there anywhere where the wording gets bogged down? Ummmm..... I think that might be it. Oh, and funny of course. Woody On Fire! Wood burningTalking Woody Stalking Woody 14:21, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 6 The tone is simply too serious in some parts, while the overall story has a lot of funny potential, there aren't many witty one-liners that would add to the humor factor.
Concept: 10 This is a very good idea.
Prose and formatting: 8 Jesus would probably be just a tad more intelligent sounding. And you ramble on occassion (not badly).
Images: 10 Your pictures and comments are very good.
Miscellaneous: 8 It just needs to be a bit wittier, more jokes in general.
Final Score: 42 42
Reviewer: Neighborofthebeast 19:41, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
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